Sunday, September 21, 2008

Visual Language | Final Revisions

Idea 1 | 1


After talking to Jamie and hearing her feedback I realized that the poster needed to be simplified even more than it already is removing static and focusing on what was important within the image. I decreased the type size of the instructions and also edited the copy to improve the effectiveness of the message. Matt also suggested that I try and trace over the image in pencil in order to clean the lines up and get all of the remaining static out of the poster. I implemented these suggestions and in the end was pleased with the result.

Idea 1 | 2

Along with making the above changes I also messed with the main copy at the bottom. Changing what is says along with the location of the text so that the new copy fit in well compositionally. 

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